MexicanTaco

That's really unfair dude. 
          
          
          Not only did you write it terribly, you copied someone else's story. Disappointing that people can't live their own life. 
          
          
          You didn't even ask her permission....
          
          I know you think it's okay because you didn't copy it word for word, but it's NOT okay. No matter what. 
          
          If you wanna write stories, write your own ORIGINAL ones, for god's sake!!
          
          
          
          
          PEACE. ✌️