anonymous_pooja

Taking a long break, because mera bahut time and energy mai isme invest karri with minimal or no rewards. 
          	
          	Thank you for sticking to the story and supporting the updates so far.

anonymous_pooja

Hello all, 
          
          I have started a new guidebook novella 'Lies Within' that shows the character design of the gen3 characters in 'Dastaan Jo Likhun' who are either in the forefront of the battle. Dealing with the consequences, aka, the 3 couples mentioned.
          
          Or the supportive or destructive side characters who shape them to strategize, aka their parents or siblings.
          
          You cannot win a game of chess with one piece ever. You always need the 16 pieces, no matter how sidelined, to play by the rules.
          
          When I say none of the characters are truly positive or negative, I mean it. 
          
          Ab yeh kalyug hai bhai! Yahan Shree Ramji ke chitran kaam nahi karega... Shree Krishna ki neeti apnao aur logo ki band bajao.
          
          Happy reading :)

anonymous_pooja

Updated 2 more chapters here if anyone would like to check them out :)
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anonymous_pooja

Me to hazma right now = Geet to Anshuman.
          
          Tadpega tu kameene. Keede padenge tere pe... narak ki aag me jalega tu @@@>×<÷<<×+>>+
          
          Blah blah blue blue f u f u for fing up such a beautiful trope. Hazma ke crore janmo tak hazme ki beemari hojaye.
          Ors bhi jska dast thik ma kr paye aur Rajan ji to kya hi bolun.

anonymous_pooja

@1Dest10 zama was tge second witer responsible for leap 2 storyline. I am calling them hazma because I hate second leap storyline (except Akshu and Abhir... and the uttrr traumatic Abhimanyu's thodu sa redemption)
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1Dest10

@anonymous_pooja hazma se kya lena dena  ..
            she just commented her opinion ...
            just asking
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anonymous_pooja

I am legit crying happy and sad tears. 
          Utkarsh sir ka vision kitna beautiful tha. 
          
          "I feel hurt for Akshara’s fans too (sometimes even more than Abhi’s).
          In my mind, Akshara always had a bigger arc than Abhi. (HC, PR, and Garima knew this). 
          I tend to do this. And if you look at real life, it holds true. (A woman’s heart is more complex and intricate and always has a longer arc.)
          Unfortunately, I never got to reach the part where Akshara’s character blossoms. A little glimpse into my world dear fans: 
          Imagine a story arc, where after marriage, Abhi instead of getting into some new trouble, triumphs in professional life… and his life reaches the next level… but now, he’s uncertain. You see, he’s always been a warrior… he knows only defending (his mother, and Akshara) and aggression (against his father), but he doesn’t know how to live in a world where there are no villains in front of him to fight. 
          And THIS is where Akshara comes to his rescue. Coz be it music, family, or love, she understood one thing that Abhi hadn’t… good and bad times pass, but relationships can be (and should be) forever. 
          In my vision, it was gonna be this little world that Akshara creates… brick by brick. Some tender moments and sometimes even tough love :)
          A bubble that the outside world wants to burst… Dr. Abhimanyu gets to learn more about life from her. 
          Yes, the life they have lived comes to haunt them. But as husband and wife.. and as Lovers, they survive. 
          And. they. thrive.
          …
          When I had spoken to Rajan ji for the 1st time, the arc of Akshara was about: Why can’t nice people win in life? Akshara’s successful life was to be inspiring for the audience too. But… I never got to tell my story. And you’ll never know how it would’ve been. 
          So I accept all the negative emotions. If I was in your place, I’d feel the same. 
          All I can say in the end is that no one other than me can even imagine how I felt as I saw them develop into something .. else."

1Dest10

@anonymous_pooja  i truly agree (except i see on insta)
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anonymous_pooja

@1Dest10 Gen4 mai nahi dekhri but twitter tags me same old cheating ML bhabi lover and FL is in lalaland with the ml
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anonymous_pooja

@1Dest10 Utkarsh sir was part of gen3 writers responsible for Abhimanyu, the Birlas and Akshara pre leaps. Garima logo ne Abhira banaya. 
            
            Utkarsh sir kisi internal politics ke 2ajah se show ko continue nahi kiye and recently he had an interview where he explains his pov on what he envisioned Akshu to be Abhira to be and how it turn3d out.
            
            The ckts are his creation so he was very very upset on the horrible treatment they got due to zama and dkp's politics. I really liked Akshara that he crafted and only because of her did I watch the show. Abhimanyu mujhe Akshra ke liye pasand tha and Akshara ka silent strength always >>>>>> The whole gen3 cast for me personally. 
            
            F js for doing abhinavs role, F zama for ruining Abhira storyline, F F F dkp and shahi for butchering the story for their greed for trp. That's it
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anonymous_pooja

Confession time: When I first started writing or thinking about a what if for Abhira/Akshara and gen3... then the first scene I envisioned was Akshara's playful entry on the boat. <3
          
          Uska smiling face had my heart from the 1st second and I actually envisioned her life from that point and thought ki uska koi sir sehla raha hai  in her misery.... because that time I disliked AbhiraSharma so much on the screen (Now I don't care what AbhiraSharma does)
          
          So when I imagined someone caressing Akshara's head in a motherly affection, I thought I might use AksharaSinghania as the person she meets... but that doesn't make sense because wo apne pure life me unse mili nahi.... and then I went through the rabbit hole of resurrecting my love and respect for Tina/Naira persona.
          
          Sherni apne cub ke liye sabse zada protective hogi so agar devastation me koi usko sambhaal sakta tha wo Naira hi thi... Aur yahan se shuru hua mera imagination ka penning down.
          
          Next confession at a later time :)

anonymous_pooja

For me the story started with Akshara #yrkkh and ended with Akshara  #yrkkh4
          
          I can't put myself through the misery of a possible reveal of the utter butchering dkp did to #yrkkh3 Akshu (her innocent flashbacks)
          
          So, signing off as a legacy viewer (of main ships (including Kairat parental +  2nd chance at life) + (Naksh & Keerti) )
          
          Jan 2009 - March 2024. Ek era ka end hogaya :(

1Dest10

@anonymous_pooja i did know ..
            i am just tired of this peice of s**
            ty for telling me
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anonymous_pooja

@1Dest10 No point whitewashing Ruhi. gen4 me wo pehli nazar ka pyar aur insta lobe yeh log recreate hi nahi karpaye jo Harshali ne kiya....
            
            
            Itna overused trope ko sahi way me Harshad ka intensity and Pranali ka vulnerability hi carry kar paya hai... Aise thode na AbhiRa and Harshali ka craze chhaya.
            
            Ruhi ke liye 1sec bhi sense nahi banta ki wo like kare Armaan ko. Bas story copy paste karni hai ghum se to kardiya.... I have never seen such a lack of chemistry in the main cast like this before.
            
            Twitter pe bhi sav bolte the ki they arr growing into their character ho jayega blah blah but 5 months me na hopaya jo Harshali did in 2 weeks.
            Isilie Sheh and Pratiskha were thrown out.
            
            Sam jo Abhira ka roll play karri hai sirf usi ke liye show chalra hai. Aise koi story hai nahi gen 4 me
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anonymous_pooja

@1Dest10 1. Manish Betrayal: Yaad bhi sabse zada inko hi ati hai Akshu ki par (traumatic) jab Akshara was on her death bed aur wo Abhira ke future ke liye bas ek bar bade papa se baat karne ki koshish karri thi then he cut the call saying "Ab kya bacha hai Kehne sunne ko... Tu humare liye  chuki hai" 
            
            and she dies within the next few hours with horrible flashbacks of that man jisko Kartik ne sahi galiyaan dithi in gen 2. Selfish!!!!
            
            
            2. Abhir: Fake abhir banke koi aya tha but it was just a side track kyunki inki kain story ko trp nahi milre the. No abhir ka mention anywhere...
            Log soch to rahe hai ki DEV (Abhira ka layer boss) might be Abhir jo revenge lega but koi story me na sir hai na pair.
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