Sequoia

Hi author what happened to love is a demon story? 

Hi author , how are you?

FIRST CHAPTER OF <LOVE IS A DEMON> IS OUT!
          
          I might change the story description though, I'm not very happy with that.

@ wydccalamity on Twitter(April 16 2022) said:
          "Imagine you getting kidnapped with a stuffy nose and they tape your mouth."
          
          I'm sorry, but that's going in the new book! I don't know where, I don't know how or when, but it's going. This is pure comedy!
          
          ~Ash

So…….when is this book being released???  just wanna know when to start being impatient 

This story is going to have a LOT of sexual tension... and it's not just between the main character and the six love interests.
          Reminder: it is a demonxhuman story with boxer jungkook!

I wanted to do some kind of poll here regarding the new story I'm working on. One of the characters is non-binary, so the pronouns used for them are they/them. Would that be confusing? They're only there for the first few chapters.
          Also do you guys want assassin Jungkook to make a return, or would you prefer boxer Jungkook?

I'm impulsive and hyperfixated on writing. Watch me start a demonxhuman story with no plot idea.
          
          (This probably won't happen. I'm at work, so my impulses are going to die by the time I get home.)
          
          ~Ash<3

Writing tip(this is applicable in all writing perspectives):
          
          Don't write a story as if it's a movie script. Your narration should not be the voice-over introduction that you see in the movies. Example of voice-over introduction (movie): "My name is Clay. I'm 17. And I'm pretty sure I just ruined my life."
          
          Instead, go for a neutral approach, but make it interesting. That's a hook. A story is very different from a movie script(coming from someone who has written scripts as well as stories before). Try introducing a character's name through a dialogue or the writing of a note(example: a remark in an exam paper). And don't gush about the personality, the sexuality and irrelevant things about the character. Express those through the character's actions, the way they speak. This is a concept of "show, don't tell." (A very common remark I receive in my Creative Writing course).
          
          Introductions like "My name is Clay, and I'm gay" are not bad, but specifying the sexuality of a character right off the bat is only done if your story heavily discussed identity and sexuality(not a bl or wlw story. Rather a story along the lines of: "finding my identity").
          
          The first chapter of your story/prologue should have the introductions of the antagonist, the protagonist, the problem, and the cause. You don't have to go into detail about them or you'll end up spoiling the future chapters, simply hint at them.
          
          ~Ash<3

Out of context, but is anyone going to point out that a 10,000 year old vampire(male, gay) is older than Jesus(correct me if I'm wrong)? And he has a modern mindset?
          Dude's from the prehistoric ages, and is homosexual? Like, he was an ape when he was turned into a vampire, and his primitive instincts and blood evolved into 21st century homosexuality when he doesn't even age(let's not get started on how a carcass became human).
          
          If it were dystopian or a fantasy world created, I wouldn't judge. But if your story is merely supernatural based on realistic society, and has the most ridiculous facts pushed into it because you romanticize the concept, I'm judging.
          
          ~Ash <3