in-depthwriter

Hello ashie96,
          
          Go through my book His Chattel Her Tyrant. 
          https://my.w.tt/c0axQwuTT6
          
          Have a look if it's possible and kindly give me feedback.
          
          Sorry, if  I disturbed you.

ashie96

Your book is good 
            The plot is nice, but you're too fast in expressing all and everything. There are few grammatical mistakes. Relax your writing. And use solid reasons for your scenes. 
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ashie96

@Writergirl36  sure I'll read your book.
            And sorry for the late reply I was actually reading something and had to finish that 
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AnnaRamakson

Hi Yashra.. I don't know how on earth you found me but I am glad you did. You are AWESOME darling! Thanks for voting for my book What Dreams Are Made Of. You made my day :) I would love to hear your feedback on the book. Pls do share. Keep reading, enjoying and voting!!! Love, Anna

AnnaRamakson

Glad u like it dear.. I can't stop smiling seeing u appreciating it.. This really means a lot to me. Keep reading and voting.. Have a great day!
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ashie96

@AnnaRamakson  it really really is a goood book!!!!  <3 
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