asthrequel

http://my.w.tt/UiNb/BMvF5K9E1s
          	
          	NEW LEVI (Shingeki no kyojin/attack on titan) X READER POSTED!
          	
          	Updates will be WEEKLY or sooner than that. YOU HAVE MY WORD.
          	
          	Summary:
          	
          	Set after the fall of Wall Maria, before the battle in Trost. You lived within the premises of the giant trees, and you didn't know a thing about your identity. All you knew was the pain you felt was like dying all over because of these big, naked monstrosities. Nonetheless, you lived, despite being mute.
          	
          	But is that all there is to you?

asthrequel

http://my.w.tt/UiNb/BMvF5K9E1s
          
          NEW LEVI (Shingeki no kyojin/attack on titan) X READER POSTED!
          
          Updates will be WEEKLY or sooner than that. YOU HAVE MY WORD.
          
          Summary:
          
          Set after the fall of Wall Maria, before the battle in Trost. You lived within the premises of the giant trees, and you didn't know a thing about your identity. All you knew was the pain you felt was like dying all over because of these big, naked monstrosities. Nonetheless, you lived, despite being mute.
          
          But is that all there is to you?

fingergunss

Shouldn't it be 私(わたし)はアニメが大好きです！(?)
          (I love anime!)
          
          I'm learning Japanese and we've been taught to do it this way
          
          I can't read all of the second part so I can't correct you on that 
          （ごめんなさい）
          
          Sincerely, a confused Japanese learner

fingergunss

Actually, I used my textbooks, not an online translator. 
            
            Also daisuki is considered love because dai means big and suki means like (if it was otherwise dai kirai wouldn't work (big hate) (source: one of my friends AND textbooks.))
            
            I haven't watched that much anime, so I don't know if it's common to omit the ga or not but its probably considered slag or the likewise if it's used my that many people.
            
            @Asthrequel
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asthrequel

@Keggo-chan I really think that is right, even though I haven't learned Japanese. I've had too much anime, and even in talk shows, they say that. For example, "Animax daisuki!" Meaning I love/really like (since ai is love, and suki is often translated to like instead of love) animax. As for the second one, it says, "but I also love/really like Levi". Japanese languange tends to put the "person talking" or "subject" at the first part of the sentence, then the object at the last, for example "Watashi ha, anime ga daisuki desu" and it's okay to omit some words, so it could be "Anime daisuki". Try translating it using a reliable online translator, it's correct.
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ao_the_squirrel_2299

I NEVER THANKED YOU FOR VOTING FOR MY STORY. I AM SO SORRY. (」ﾟﾛﾟ)｣ THANK YOU SO SO SO SO SO SO SO MUCH FOR VOTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUCH LOVE, DEAR! (⌒_⌒;)

asthrequel

@ao_the_squirrel_2299 It's no problem, really! There aren't many decent shin-ah x readers out there, and I'm saying yours is good. ;)
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Boom_the_Vampiress

Whoa, haven't seen you in a while. Nice profile pic~! (I just had to mention that)
             You know, if I didn't have Terasaka, Isogai, Chiba, Maehara, Yoshida and Nagisa.....I would actually fight you for Karma. Mmm....should I? XD.

Boom_the_Vampiress

@Asthrequel For some reason, now that he's taken....I want him more... (stay strong! *^*)
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asthrequel

this message may be offensive 
@Soundless_Boom Yea. I drew that *winks* and the Karma a.k.a. my husband drawing in the background, too. Asano is also... oh Karma don't look so jealous. Buuut, I don't need to fight anyone for Karma. Why? He'd choose me *flips hair* Lol don't kill me bruh! XD
            
            But yea. It's been a while. I'll be back. And when I do, I'll be back with Karma-kyun. Kyun-kyun~
            
            I missed you Boom!
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CapsUnlock_

@Asthrequel Hindi, ok lang iyan :) the descriptions are beautiful, and it needs some time to get used to, but overall it's fine for me. (I'm not really that good of a critic either, so I'm not too picky about my books, as long as I feel good reading it.)

asthrequel

@CapsUnlock_ Thanks ;) I'll work hard to make things more simple. But my writing changes, you can tell by the next chapters.
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