Hay ! I really like your story ' the golden child '. Maybe you want to take a look at mine , I'm open for ideas. Of course just if you want to, but I thought maybe you could like it ! :)
@ _Queenofdevil_ thank you so much for your feedback ! And yeah, that's true , I make grammar mistakes sometimes , I try to change that and I warned the readers before on my profile, haha , :D
@_Queenofdevil_ Your storyline is good, but I think your main problem is to be careful of your gramma and typos. It's a common mistake to make, but overall it's a great story.