Sailor Crash

https://www.wattpad.com/story/363594860-the-falcon-and-the-raven
          HI this is my first story
          please check it out and give you honest feedback
          Thank you

Hey what happened to your stories I was waiting to reread them when u were done with them

Helloo author, I was wondering what happened to "a player's game"? :) 

WELL WELCOME BACK AFTER A WHOLE YEAR!

IN THE HANDS OF MY NEW BODY GUARd..... You had  pretty nice story and I really  like it. Editing and grammar check are badly needed.  Also the story is very much interesting only if you could make it long like make it 50 or 60 chapters and make every chapter long enough. Add more scene and please identify if the story was written in first, second or third ppint of view. Thanks and good luck

If her games done can u change it to complete where is say updated last please

Welcome back sweetie
          

July 25, 2020 
          Been so long since I logged in here. 
          They say when life kicks you down, you prefer to distance yourself from the rest of the world to heal yourself from inside out. 
          After my accident back in June of 2019, I haven't been the same. And that has caused me to have lots of writers block, which leads to distancing myself from all of you. 
          I apologize. 
          I will take a look back at my notes, my comments and my inbox, I will try to get to every single one of you  guys soon. 
          
          I love you all, and the fact that you guys are still reading my books melts my little heart. .. 
          
          I thank you YOU GUYS KEEP ME GOING.

The storie abt her complete or hvent yet... Sequel to player

any update yr storie..