Nssksunmoon

      You need to finish your Naruto fanfic it’s the Best fanfic I have ever read and I have read over two hundred I’m begging   you to Please finish it !!!  I’ll get on my knees and kiss your feet for hours with no problems with a smile on my face no cap just please …

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I can send you some Naruto books like this is you want but there not mAny
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Speartron217

Hi I like your books, and I was wondering if you could read my book, and tell me what you think about it, and if I should improve anything. I started writing the book 1, or 2 weeks ago, and it is called The Grand Plan: Part 1. you are going to need to type in my profile name Spearwriter 234, because my book doesn't show up when you type it in, and it is a fanfiction, Naruto Alternate Universe book.

daydreamer8520

@Speartron217 Glad to help!
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Speartron217

Thank you for your advice daydreamer85290, and I will have fun with my story since it is my first.
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daydreamer8520

@Speartron217 First off I am so glad you like my stories as someone who is constantly trying and trying to improve with every chapter I am shocked you want my opinion on improvements. So my advice would be don't do any unnecessary pov changes especially if it's for one line or for a quick paragraph, try and space out your writing a bit so its not to cluttered, and since it's lemon book I wouldn't, personally, keep putting a lemon warning at the beginning of every chapter, but that's just my personal choice. Other than that it seems pretty good so far, not my cup of tea as I dont read lemon stories often, but it is getting better with each chapter you do. Don't stop, keep editing, and have fun with your story!
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