You know, I read your fic like two years ago, when I got this HUGE crush in Charlie Dalton. I remember I loved it, and at the time it was quite difficult to find one, since there weren’t that many. Anyways, what I’m trying to say is that I remember it being absolutely amazing, really. I didn’t find anything cringe at all BUT if you think it needs editing and it’s your wish, then, you have all liberty to do it, I’ll read it again either way. I miss it