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Sorry for the post bomb!! Please give me feedback, anyone from the Wattpad family will do as I don't have friends to criticize my work, help the fellow junior writer!! https://www.wattpad.com/story/371556601?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=johaan_