@dhara88
I think you'd like this story: "31?" by LavanyaSwamy on Wattpad https://www.wattpad.com/story/283649577?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=LavanyaSwamy&wp_originator=H8FB4XvHdUY%2FFPLlm9JjhIH5dLINmtN9Mywx%2FMtC7dCBTZb5PPT6KCuIXjSSKttbi0Ji7g3R36ezz6N8imlaBnhJLlPr2CkHMc4Bnj2%2FcJNh%2FBeyWzBquu8dN3f%2FdRdU
Sweet surprise- very nice story
Hi i do love your book and your own way of writing is wonderful and i look forward to reading more of your work please do writ more I really enjoy myself reading you book keep it up and all the best
Sweet surprise nice and simple story
Hey @dhara88!!! Thank you very much for voting on my story "HIS SECOND BRIDE HER SECOND LOVE".
Hey Dhara
Thanks for voting Broken Hearts. I'm so glad that you read my book and even supported by voting.
Enjoy Reading :)
Hi people I have written a new story in the romance genre, called "Sweet Surprise". Will you be kind enough to give me some feedback on the story? I know most of you are probably reading great stories right now, but let me know even if you read one chapter! Thank you so much for the votes and encouragement.
Thank you everyone for supporting Mia and Edward in "The Kindhearted Luna". Its right now ranked 15. I feel truly accomplished, and maybe I should consider a career in writing. To everyone who has voted and to everyone who has silently followed this book, your encouragement has compelled me to write another story "Sweet Surprise"
Hi ...
I can't find chapter 1 in the kindhearted luna. Are you in the middle of editing the stories? Because instead of chapter 1 i find chaper 18.
Please fix this so i can read the stories.
Thank you.
@lucys05 thank u, i'll keep that in mind. I wrote the story in third person. Therefore i could not really separate the Pov.
@lucys05 i've finnish reading your book. Well to be honest, sometimes i can't understand why the stories became like that. Maybe when you change your pov or a flashback stories you can inform us by using italic for a flashback or give it some space and sign or in bold whose pov that we are read. It was a good stories, i like your stories... i hope i dont offense you n you stories because every writer have their own way to express their thougt . :)
I just finished reading The Kindhearted Luna. Great book and storyline. I honestly can't recall reading anything too similar, either online or print. I do admit, however to having some confusion with a few parts as well as not feeling a complete closure. I hope this doesn't come off as criticism or offend you. I am sure that different readers have the same or similar thoughts of books that they have read; even though the author feels the story is detailed and complete. I am, however, going to read your book a second time to make sure that I haven't misread something. Again, I did enjoy your book. Thank you
I did edit the story. No major changes. Do you think i should enter the Wattys, or its too premature for a first-time author
Hi thanks for writing back. Yes I feel the same at times when I read the book. I'm glad that you have pointed it out. Many readers have felt the same