savage_alone07

Sorry for posting here? Can u plz check out mine book? 
          I would appreciate it if you could take a look at it. 
          
          The name of the book is   Agnihotri's- The Sinner. 
          Plz do vote and comments too.
          
          
          I think you'd like this story: "Agnihotri's- The SINNER" by savage_alone07 on Wattpad https://www.wattpad.com/story/349767141?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=savage_alone07&wp_originator=3SSmD%2F0Yq1OA46a6QOplcVRTToRbM7Wto9eUcjXdmdjkskDuJMranL%2BrrbF3EZA5AknLZ%2B2L%2FYOm8n5AixFiZQR%2BSNkheI3yjyAuxCZtLW1WpGfcoNI%2Fji6fsWcY7Gf4

4rayyy

Do you accept constructive criticism?
          If yes then I’d suggest you,to improve your English through reading books,or use apps(translating apps or apps that form better sentences for you)for your dialogues and description(since English is not your first language).
          Your plot and characters are good,but to attract more audience you need to improve.
          If you’re still uncomfortable,write in your mother tongue then translate into English and refrain using emoticons to be more expressive;Descriptions would be better.
          
          P.S. ask a friend for help

4rayyy

Use AI webs too
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