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Blasianmom27

Hey, I still can't get over about for real...what if I write a POV/short Chapters dedicated only for her, hahaha, maybe you help write too...
          
          Goes like:
          
          She was so sure to be with his mate to walk to the moon. Laying on her pyre, waiting for her body to turn to ashes and for the Moon to claim her and be with her mate forever peacefully. She is tired of this world the cruelty, the violence and just a matter of time that this world would be undone bec.of the King's blood. Liam is all she need right here, right now.
          
          The branches, little twigs and flowers started to be carried by the soft breeze as they all turned to ashes.
          
          Whisper.
          
          "Lina." the female voice whispered.
          
          "Evangeline, not yet." she whispered again but firm this time.
          
          "Wake up!" a whisper yet very forceful
          
          She opened her eyes.. " no..no..no..no...Liam!" her voice still hoarse from the long sleep she was in. "This is impossible! This is not happening!" Confusion, anger mixed in as she knelt to the ground screaming to the moon.
          
          What is the Moon wanted her to do?
          She just wanted to be with her mate. Running not knowing where to go. She knew for sure she is not going to Mangata or Tikanni. Her heart, her beast doesn't want to see any of them. Not now.not ever!
          
          (Sorry I will stop it her for now, just want to know what u thunk first..hahahahahhaha, don't judge I am not a good writer at all)

fleauryfff

hey! not baddddddd, the writing style is almost similar to the author’s!! or maybe i feel tht way bcs ive been reading three books of hers non stop and tht im just used to it lmao. Honestly im not a writer myself too so im not in a place to judge bahahaha but if you do wanna continue, maybe you could try and finish the series first? there is more to evangeline later on towards the end. But hey, its really awesome that youre writing this bahahaha and its rlly cool tht ure sharing it with me! 
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Blasianmom27

I mean can't get over about Evangeline for real...sorry typos
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