goldenscares666

Ahh… See, this is why I need to check my notes more often because I completely skipped over a really good scene I wanted in Love is Evil. I put a lot of the points I wanted to talk about in the scene subconsciously in the most recent chapter I uploaded, but it was meant to happen a little later. This is what I get for having no organizational skills lol. I’ll still try to fit it in somehow and try to salvage it, but if it feels like a repetitive scene, that’s why. A shame cuz I had a good idea for the next few chapters that’ll probably have to be scrapped and butchered now for the sake of this missed part, Or maybe I’ll decide to keep it how it is, who knows? I just really wanted it in. 

Crysty_0D4

@ goldenscares666  Awe it's alright darling. I would say that you should keep it for now and think of some parts that would fit in the scene before it. And even so if that doesn't work,just keep for now until you found a good opening for you to use it.
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Crysty_0D4

Gimmi one opening word that's also an ending word. Like maybe "Wait for me!" She said as she chase the bus, "Wait for me..." A tear drop from her eyes,hugging his body as her knees droped to the ground,can't baring the pain...
          
          

Crysty_0D4

@ tommuiixdd  alright then,thank you
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tommuiixdd

@Crysty_0D4 She woke up. Groaning in frustration, she reached to her nightstand to turn off her alarm.
            
            
            She woke up. Panting heavily, she clutched the bedsheets as she realized it was all a dream.
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YandereFanficQueen

Hi, I hope it’s okay, but I would like to post your work on TikTok due to its amazingness and great writing skills. So, if you don’t mind may I have permission to post it? 

goldenscares666

Sorry, but no thank you. I appreciate the offer, though. 
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YandereFanficQueen

I also would like to advertise your butterfly one too if it’s alright. 
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IMN0TF0X

Hello! I finished reading what there was of music of the angels and loved it! It’s probably my favorite of your stories! I was wondering if you’re planning or close to posting a new chapter soon? I adore the book and Erik and find your spin on phantom of the opera so cool, i completely understand if you aren’t close to having a chapter done and wish you well, thanks for time and I hope you continue writing!

goldenscares666

I have it mostly written out, so it should update soon! I’m glad you’re enjoying the story so far.
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goldenscares666

Ahh… See, this is why I need to check my notes more often because I completely skipped over a really good scene I wanted in Love is Evil. I put a lot of the points I wanted to talk about in the scene subconsciously in the most recent chapter I uploaded, but it was meant to happen a little later. This is what I get for having no organizational skills lol. I’ll still try to fit it in somehow and try to salvage it, but if it feels like a repetitive scene, that’s why. A shame cuz I had a good idea for the next few chapters that’ll probably have to be scrapped and butchered now for the sake of this missed part, Or maybe I’ll decide to keep it how it is, who knows? I just really wanted it in. 

Crysty_0D4

@ goldenscares666  Awe it's alright darling. I would say that you should keep it for now and think of some parts that would fit in the scene before it. And even so if that doesn't work,just keep for now until you found a good opening for you to use it.
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ASAHIIN

what does phil think about the 'send you to the deepest pits of hell' saying? :0

goldenscares666

I don’t think he’d feel one way or the other about it. He’d probably say it himself, actually. 
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goldenscares666

Would anyone care if I deleted my Light of the Dark series? I know it was technically my first book and all, but it gives me the biggest ick every time I even look at the cover, not gonna lie lol

LeisteVantas

@goldenscares666 Light of the Dark was how I found you, it brings me nostalgia. But if you're gonna delete it, at least make plans to rewrite it? It's so near and dear to me, I would be heartbroken! 
            
            But, in the end, it's your choice. We'll love you either way!
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Asat84

@goldenscares666 wait i was gonna read it tomorrow tho give me some time
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Livylex13

Go ahead, if it doesn’t fit your writing style and you dislike it you should!
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goldenscares666

It’s official, Matt and Gavin from Unhealthily Obsessed are originally from Winnipeg, but move to a smaller area, where the story takes place. I’m not sure I need to find a specific place for the actual location of the story, as it’s not so necessary to the plot, but it will be implied that they are all still in Canada. If I do feel the need to add such details as I go through editing, I’ll probably ask for more help, but thank you so much to everyone who gave suggestions. You were a great help!

ASAHIIN

Winnipeg reminds me of Alice in wonderland for some reason. I should get some sleep..
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tommuiixdd

@goldenscares666 RAHHHH CANADA (im not Canadian)
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Lunar-Muse

Proof that Canadians can be crazy too ❤️
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goldenscares666

I may need your help again, readers! Remember that posting where I asked if I should write in Gaven and Matt from Unhealthily Obsessed to be from Canada? Well, with a resounding yes, I plan to, just one itty bitty problem. I can’t decide where specifically they should be from. I get Saskatchewan vibes for some reason, but I’m open to other areas too, so if you can throw out some city/town names for me that would be a great help because I’m too indecisive and narrowing down my options would help a ton. Please and thank you very much! 

k11tyme0w

As a Canadian myself, I can tell you that just from the way they dress alone that they belong in Manitoba. I just get this gut feeling also.
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macy712

A good way to pick a province would be what kind of landscape you were reading about in the story. Like Alberta (besides from the Rockies )and Saskatchewan are pretty flat in some parts if I’m correct, Alberta has quite a lot of forests if I remember correctly. British Columbia has the Rockies and one part of it can be quite dry like Kelowna, or dense forests in other parts , Ontario and Quebec both have a good mix of flatland, some elevation (less in Ontario) and forests. I wish I could help more with Saskatchewan but that’s like one of the only provinces I haven’t been able to go on the lower half of Canada. I also don’t know much about the islands or Manitoba but I mostly assume Manitoba is like a good mix between Saskatchewan and Ontario. And if you don’t want to write or mentioned Quebec French, stay away from Quebec because most other provinces, don’t really use French in my experience, at least out west. I hope this helps a bit.
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-just_imagine

Lowkey reminds me of a Newfie but the accent would be a bit hard to write. I could totally see Manitoba tho
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