haru_161

Happy new year everyone!!!

haru_161

Hi 
          To everyone who had been reading any of my books/fanfics whatever you wanna call it, I just wanted to say that I’ll take ‘em all down and overwork some of the chapters.
          
          Please do not question,also I’m sorry for not updating for nearly over a month! 
          
          That’s all I had to say so bye

haru_161

So I kinda have a question. 
          
          
          
          Why is my writing so cringe? Does anyone know?
          
          
          
          Also can anyone give me tipps for writing since I feel like I’m only writing like 5 years old and kinda need help…
          
          
          
          So can anyone answer? Sorry for the bother and rudeness btw.
          
          
          
          Also have a great day/good night!

AlorySkyz22

@haru_161 <3 stop with the self-deprecation, you're okay, you have done nothing wrong. Well, good Luck! <3
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haru_161

@AlorySkyz22 thank you for the info you gave me! It really helps a lot to know what others think and I guess your right about the part where I lean too heavily on wanting other people to read my stories, I can change that. I can also try working on my descriptions now that I think about it… but thanks for your opinion again! I’m sorry for bothering you with my comment btw. But again thank you!
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AlorySkyz22

@haru_161 I mean, it's alright. Your format is a bit different to other writers, as you center your text, but..for small stuff, Grammar is good, and you have teensy spelling mistakes.
            And I guess...your descriptions are a bit shallow? But it's straight to the point.
            
            Take this comment with a grain of salt. It's better to ask a writing community, they might be able to get something. I create imaginary stories on what-ifs and build-ups and stuff, so I don't have anything original like you.
            
            But if you're frustrated, why not focus on other stuff instead of writing? Don't lean too heavily on people reading your work, just think of sharing them. That's my way anyway. Being scared of the public's opinion, I am.
            
            No rudeness detected, only self-deprecation. Anyways, have a good time!
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haru_161

          
          Ugh…hi! 
          
          
          
          
          Can anyone please give me their opinion on my books? I kinda need it… also I do not mean you @icanflymylove we can discuss that on Insta and also it’s always or mostly you who answers . Sorry for the rudeness but I’m just stating a fact. 
          
          I hope you have a great day/good night and till later