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Hi, hfjjjdjcnccj's. I just wrote my first completed story, and I just wanted to know if it's worth reading. If not you can tell me what's wrong with it and I'll fix it. If it is tell me what you liked about it. https://x.com/AnimeFrontier1/status/1934781202008879370?t=-Ytqwefh0L00v3ibxPGZ5w&s=19