hippstazenzi

I mean and concussion, but collapsed lung is more serious, i think...

Blakey6

I don't know if you are still providing your service for critiquing that posted 1 week ago but I only have 800 words and not asking for much. If you decline, I understand. I will return the favour by critiquing something of your choice. :)

professorcastle

Please be my critic for this book!
          1.Title: The Kiss
          2. Genre: Romance
          3.Summary: Julie is a high school acting geek. Her crush is the most popular boy in school. His girlfriend is the most popular girl. She knows. He doesn't. Annie bullies Julie. When Julie and Ron turn into Romeo and Juliet in the school play, Annie will try and stop it however she can. And then more things come up. And more.
          4. Chapters you want me to critique (Up to five) The ones that are out.
          5. Anything you really want me to focus on? Nothing just critic it please!
          6. Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/6597063-the-kiss