𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧𝙨. ━ 𝔞𝔫𝔬𝔫

sometimes, i feel like a carrot

im so so sorry to bother you, but i was wondering if you could please check out my book "rogue - english version"... i translated it - it was originally in my first language, portuguese - and really wanted a bit of feedback as to how i can improve my writing! if you don't wanna give feedback, that's fine too! it would mean the world to me if you could read it :) here's a description:
          Free yourself from your roots.
          ******
          Kappa was never one to follow the rules but, out of fear, he always did. His footsteps guided him along the usual, routined path, but his eyes searched for any source of adrenaline. The war dragged on before his eyes, time like sand. Even so, Kappa was not like those terrorist rebels who frightened innocent villages. After all, staying on the fence was his specialty.
          But when an enigmatic letter arrives in his mail, everything is about to change.
          here's the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/241433696-rogue-english-version-%E2%9C%94 
          i hope you like it!

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          ily bubs <3

heya amazing slytherin! Thank you so much for checking out Neptunic Rings :D
          
          Have a beautiful day/night!

Hello to avoid an unfollow from my sec acc pls follow me♡

Hello, @http--malfoy .
          If you do get a chance to read my work, Reviving Luna, I would love to hear your thoughts! Try the first chapter here: https://www.wattpad.com/775651655-reviving-luna-chapter-1
          Best, Tommy

oh well,,, back to draco/slytherin theme

aww i really like my brown theme lmao it gives me a feeling i can't really explain but it remind me of home :')

Hello fellow slytherin
          :) 

Heya
          Please check my book out 
          Hope you like it
          And do tell how's it and i will work on it 
          No pressure read only if you want to 
          Do ignore the typos and mistakes
          Will be editing soon.
          Thanks
          Love
          Anshika❤
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/217317839?utm_medium=link&utm_source=android&utm_content=story_info