@iminstorybrooke
When you use "When that every do es s" Hon that should have be "when that ever does" Ever and every have 2 different meanings! And I believe that this is the second pe third time I've see this.....
@Misty2Dorothea ❤
First mistake in chapter 8. Where Emma's thinking about Regina's question how you had her thinking about her being a but, which I'm sure you meant a bit confused, and I'm sure that you were just in a fast paced typing mode and didn't even notice!
Girl, I'm an editor at heart and I'm going into chapter 7 and not one time have I felt like I needed to correct you on anything!! And I SO LOVE your writing, because you write clean, NO swearing like most of the other stories contain, and usually in those stories their grammar is really bad, and I'm constantly correcting them!! So bless your heart, I'm enjoying it!!
Thank you, @Misty2Dorothea ❤
Great stories
bless
@oncerin_storybrooke OMG YOU ROCK
IM TRYING TO FOLLOW YOU BUT MY CLEATS ARE STUCK IN YOUR CORNEAS