@atidsoptimist I've found your story interesting and funny. I think your picture of Mr. Darcy it's quite accurate, even if sometimes, I feel he exaggerates a little bit, but at the same time I'm convinced that there's no other way he could react, after all the man is not a people person, very quiet and introverted, so in his role of a gentleman of the highest class. In your picture of the other characters I agree with their personality and behaviour (Caroline can be a pain in the ass every time she can do it and she's found the way to hide it when needed. Louisa and Mr. Hurst got more participation, that's a very good idea. Bingley, well, I found him charmer and more in love than Austen's description of him. And I love the way Jane reacts). And for the writing, your style is clear and fluent, I think you've practiced by now because there isn't parts where someone can become lost or can't comprehend what's going on. You're pretty good at it, you've got the esencial of Pride and Prejudice. Good job! Hope you continue with the updates.
