jaspoppy

Okay I was writing some things for a new book but why does this line get me?
          	
          	"Yeah, he may love you, but dose he makes your heart melt. Dose he makes you laugh like I do.  Make you wish that you could stay in his arms forever. Make you smile and laugh that god beautiful laugh? Because I know for a fact that you felt all of those things with me. And like hell will I let another man raise and love my daughter as his own... Let another man love you."

jaspoppy

Okay I was writing some things for a new book but why does this line get me?
          
          "Yeah, he may love you, but dose he makes your heart melt. Dose he makes you laugh like I do.  Make you wish that you could stay in his arms forever. Make you smile and laugh that god beautiful laugh? Because I know for a fact that you felt all of those things with me. And like hell will I let another man raise and love my daughter as his own... Let another man love you."

jaspoppy

Hi! I got a comment yesterday on my book about my spelling and how the plot flows in my book. I take stuff like that hard because I’m not the best writer, but I write how I like. I write how I think the book flows. I don’t really go over my books because I don’t have the time to do so. 
          
          I was never that good with spelling and stuff in school and I sometimes just let my computer spell check for me. In time I will go properly over my work but I don’t have that time. 
          
          I’ve only had theses past few days free. It makes me hate my writing. Thinking I’m a terrible writer and you guys don’t like it. 
          
          I appreciate letting me know that I got a word wrong, but commenting on every line is annoying and makes my confidence lack. It actually made me cry. 
          
          I’ve gotten it on some of my other books and then I got messages. 
          
          I’ve blocked and deleted all there comments because it makes me sad.  Writing is something I love to do. And I don’t want this one person to make me stop. 
          
          It was on my Last Life book and I thought I was writing that very well. I loved the progress I was getting with that book. And I known I don’t have a lot of chapters out, but that because I write lost of drafts and I have other books.
          
          My other books that I wrote like two years ago are different. I was a whole different person then, my writing style was different. 
          
          So please no stuff like that. I might come of sensitive but I’m not going to lie I am. As I said writing is what I love to do and I don’t want to stop because of this. 
          
          I’m still writing but I’m going to take a break. Don’t stop commenting stuff but please be mindful when you do comment stuff like that. 
          
          Thank you! 

jaspoppy

@LynBarnes  Thank you.   That means a lot to me. 
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LynBarnes

@jaspoppy I'm here to make a statement, I love all your stories, I went to your profile and ended up reading 3 more.
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jaspoppy

@Leobrxdyy Thank you. I’m good with criticism it’s just how they have been saying it that’s the problem. 
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