johnteller1992
I may salvage an idea I had from the other fanfics and scrapped chapters I made from last year for Blue's Lament for the finale of the Part One series. Let me know if you guys are into it.
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johnteller1992
Yo I kinda hit a writer's block and I'm stumped to how I should continue this story. Is there anything or anything yall want to see added to the Decepticon Rookie? Let me know!
johnteller1992
Thanks to everyone who supported my latest project, but I’m trashing half of it and going with something completely new.
The way I was going felt too pretentious and preachy at the time, and that’s not the theme I’m trying to capture with my stories.
So from here on out, I’m going to be refurbishing the first five chapters of Blue’s Lament and pumping out fresh ones with a more lighter tone, but still maybe keep the same feel of it. Have a good morning/night, God bless.
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You know, it’s kinda weird. When I was posting nsfw content, I’d have people flocking towards my books. This world is fucked up.
johnteller1992
@FaizNabil thank you for the advice, I’ll be sure to use that advice to the best of my ability.
FaizNabil
@johnteller1992 Hmm... I could see that the book is sometimes hard to follow for new readers considering that it is based on a continuity (based on season 3). Perhaps you could try to add some images at the beginning of the story so that some readers could have some form of visualization to ease them up on the characters aside from them having to search it up (mostly on the obscure characters). That's all I can give you for now.
johnteller1992
Sorry for the late chapter post, but I hope you all enjoy it!
johnteller1992
I changed the name to You Give Me The Blues mostly because the original title to this book was not really what my book entails. I hope you guys find the new one more fitting.
johnteller1992
Just about 9k words in almost done with this chapter. Don’t worry, everyone. It’s almost done.
johnteller1992
Since I got the first act in the series down, I wanna move from writing 5k words in the book to 10k-15k words from here on out. Seriously, if you all have ANY critique at all, please do comment. Thanks and have a good morning, you all. ~ JT
johnteller1992
Well, chapter 3 just been posted. Hope you all enjoy it.
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Damn, been a while since I made a post but whatever. I guess I’m having a bit of trouble with the You Give Me The Blues story and I just feel like venting about it.
The first rendition of the story sucked, no, scratch that. It FUCKING sucked. So I had to rewrite it all over again, and I gotta be honest, I’m pretty happy with the way it turned out.
Though, for some fucking reason or another, I keep hitting a dead end wall being 1.2k words deep. Do y’all have any suggestions?