Lady_Saki01

@juliatingz
          Hi! I just added your story to my library and so far I think it’s good. I’m a bit of a writer myself so I just wanna help with a bit of constructive criticism, and I think your story would be even better with more detail on things like background, character images, emotions, actions, and environments. Maybe add some wind or sound and how things would feel, hear or look to the readers to give them a better feel of things. Hopefully what I said will help. If you’re not interested in my help then I’m okay with that! Good luck!

juliatingz

@Lady_Saki01 thank you so much :) nah ofc I'm interested I really appreciate it :)
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