kayow29

It seems that many people feel that the side characters are not focused enough, i think i may rewrite the entire novel. It's not a big deal as i only do this as hobby but it would be better to know what's lacking and not, so i would like to hear some opinions
          	
          	thanks for reading

kayow29

It seems that many people feel that the side characters are not focused enough, i think i may rewrite the entire novel. It's not a big deal as i only do this as hobby but it would be better to know what's lacking and not, so i would like to hear some opinions
          
          thanks for reading