sorry for the delay everyone. i’m finally back home for puerto rico and recently discovered a new website to help my editing and it made me realise i’m not that good of a writer lol. i got sucked in a deep hole of over editing the next chapter to the point where i rewrote most of it. i’m only going to edit the sentence structures from now on and then post. i’ll probably edit the adverb uses later on, but i do want to post the chapter for you guys as soon as i can!
but the bright side is that my writing should improve from this point forward! i’ve fallen into the giant rabbit hole of pinterest and have read SO many writing tips and ways to improve my writing! so hopefully from now on, my writing will be more comprehensible, fluid, and elevated.