larnieaofnarnia

Chapter 2 is up! It took a lot out of me to work through a hangover and the flu, so feedback would be appreciated. (On the bright side, today is the first day in a week I've woken up without a fever, so hooray!)

JDBryce

A comment you made on a thread about racism caught my attention, so I decided to give you a follow. I don't spend much time on this site, but I'll give "Third World" a read when I get the chance. I see on your profile that you offer feedback on stories, so I'd love to know what you think about my story 'Moments'. It's not really a conventional short story/novella, but I'm putting it out there to see how it gets received.

JDBryce

@larnieaofnarnia It will probably be easiest if you comment directly. Thank you :) I don't mind the wait
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larnieaofnarnia

@JDBryce Thanks for all that :) I am a bit backlogged on things I've promised to read due to some illness and whatnot, but I'll definitely give it a look once I've finished up my current work. Would you prefer for me to comment directly on the novella or message it to you instead?
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larnieaofnarnia

So, New Year's basically kicked my ass this year. My friend who was visiting from the Marine Corps insisted that the two of us get insanely drunk - and we did - but I also ended up getting sick, delaying the publishing of Chapter Two. I'm feeling somewhat better, so it'll be up ASAP!