larryBourgeois612

Loove this book it's amazing  and sooo realistic 
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/37250506

AceLTLady

I have made your One-shot suggestion!I hope you enjoy it!

larryBourgeois612

@AceLTLady  it was amazing your really good and creative love this story so much keep up the amazing work
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larryBourgeois612

is the story in third person because if it is that's will still work because you can show how they both fell so I think you should start with larry and finish with Lau sencing that larry is jealous and how happy that makes him something like that I think would be good

larryBourgeois612

are you going to write about them being at dance competition and like Lau could do some cool moves and as he's doing them they could be Larry's favorite and larry could be telling the reader how much he loves it when he does them and how proud of lau he feels when lau does those moves and that they end up winning the competition and them all these girls might want to get Lau's attention by flirting  with him and then we can read larry  being mad and jealous about that  so that my idea right now ♡

AceLTLady

@larryBourgeois612 Genius.You are a genius.Thanks for the idea.I think I can work with this.Two questions though.
            Would it all be in Larrys POV?
            How would it end?
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larryBourgeois612

um I'm not really a creative writer just a reader um so bad a coming up with stuff , but I think that it would be nice if we can get to see larry showing his love to Lau because its always the other way around so yeah that my idea sorry again is its lame ♡<3<3:O

AceLTLady

@benichoumbenguele no it's not lame.I know what you mean.Thats actually what I wanted to do next.:O)
            You see the problem is that I have no idea what should happen for each of the one-shots.The first one I did was one I had imagined before and I decided to write it out.But now I am drained of ideas!Which is why I asked.But it's cool if you don't have any storyline ideas.;O)
            But if you do,tell me.:O)
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AceLTLady

Thanks for the follow.If you have any ideas for more one-shots please tell me because that would be really helpful. :O)

larryBourgeois612

@AceLTLady  um I'm really not a creative writer just a reader I'm so bad at coming up with stuff, but I think it would be nice if we can get to see larry showing his love for Lau because it's always the other way around so yeah that's an idea I think haha lol sorry if its lame♡<3;-)
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