@JunHyung_Byangs hi! so sorry for the very late response. oh no, i suck at giving advices, but i guess, you have to take it easy for yourself, first and foremost. we improve writing by writing all the time, and going back to your old works to see if you have something to improve on. i write on online platforms not really to showcase what i wrote but also to have feedback (but i guess this is case-to-case basis. because one can't really be sure if the feedback is genuine. we also need to be ready for constructive criticism, and ignore the destructive ones)