Hi friends, Im 17 years old and finishing my last year of highschool. 
If you wouldn't mind reading my ongoing original story 'Bad Blood' I'd love some feedback or any advice you might have.  It'd really help me out and improve my writing! 

BAD BLOOD PLAYLIST UPDATED HERE: 
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLDomReW6HGNnYB95EbpWtBrR98VcZeZIE

Music:
 - John Butler Trio
 - Mumford & Sons
 - Alexi Murdoch
 - Kodaline
 - Bon Iver
 - Bleachers
 - Passenger
 - Bear's Den
 - Ben Howard
 - Hudson Taylor
 - Ziggy Alberts