lululady15

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FellowGayReader

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Hello! I enjoy your work but is it okay if I give you some tips for better/clearer writing?
          You can't answer yet cuz I haven't posted this but lezgo-
          
          Paragraphs. Using these will make your work more clearer and less cramped. For me (and probably alot others) I tend to finish the paragraph I'm on if I need to look away or leave. Plus, it just makes the writing look better. Especially use these after speach, let's say:
          
          "John!" Sherlock cries from his abandoned room, hands fisting the sheets and eyes watering through the sleep that still fogged his mind.
          
          "What?" John asked as his hands pushed the door opening, only to cut himself off as he sw the state of the detective before him "Holy shit- What's wrong?"
          
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          That was just one tip but I love your books!
          
          (Also try explain the situation more, like, what's happening, how they look, how theyre doing it)
          
          It's cool if yiu don't use these, we all have different writing styles.
          
          I feel guilty now but k bai-