@novelfictionalworld hello! i voted for your book and would really appreciate it if you could do the same.
here are my thoughts on your book: i think it has a great premise, and i’ve enjoyed it so far. however, i noticed quite a few grammatical errors, which is understandable if you're not a native speaker. also, i'd suggest using quotation marks (") to indicate dialogue, as it can be a bit confusing to read without them.