@mailmi
hey!!!!
um alphabet soup is ok
can u make the killer....well, kill......for a reason?
maybe not just kill for fun?
i really can't stand people that kill for fun in books
Of course you can have it. You're in column ED.
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0ArANSGC4bAPAdGNVQkc1NmZkQzMxWE9KS1pkQ05rOWc
And, well, with the Characterization, yes, I don't want you to tell me everything about her. But I want a little, maybe even a lot more than you're giving me right now. And find ways to fit in details, so you don't have to just say "She looked slim with blue eyes and blonde hair." Say something like "He slipped the necklace onto her slim neck."
Just post on our forum! To get an A+, you have to have very good quality writing in one or more of the categories on our critique. The link to the critiquing forum is http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/319899/Chapter+1+Critiquing:+1+every+day+(revised+rules!),
Hey! What do I have to do to get an A+? Saw your piece in the clubs but couldn't find the link. It's finals time for me so I'd love to see if I'm passing ;) my story is:
http://www.wattpad.com/story/313075-the-unknowables
Hey everyone, if you're bored and waiting for your critique (or just bored) you should check out my short story Alphabet Soup.
Happy reading!
Here is my link:
http://www.wattpad.com/story/2447423-roma-lycanthropa
Hey fans, if you're kinda bored, you should check out my short story (which I'm going to turn into a novel for NaNoWriMo) Alphabet Soup. It's my only story on here so far. Happy Reading!
I really did like the first chapter. (The first A++ I've ever given.) Here's the link to the google doc.
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0ArANSGC4bAPAdGNVQkc1NmZkQzMxWE9KS1pkQ05rOWc
Hey! Thanks for the awesome review! I'm glad you liked it! I was wondering if I could get the full review though. That'd be awesome. =D