Melina

Hi, I've just updated Chapter 19 of Psycho Pass Redemption. Starting from this chapter, I'm making some changes to the story's development while keeping the overall plot. I'm focusing on delving deeper into the characters' psychological aspects and improving my writing.
          
          I'm planning to use AI to transcribe the audio from Psycho Pass Zero, which I haven't found translated yet. I must admit I haven't read the novel about the Specimen Case, and I might be altering the original story and its characters, so I'm gathering more information. If not, I may have to deviate from the canon again. Psycho Pass Zero is the only part of the series I haven't seen, and it interests me.
          
          It's possible that this chapter will undergo further modifications in the future if it deviates too much from the canon. However, I wanted to share it to get it out of my head and take a break from it for a while.
          
          Chapters with significant changes (new dialogues) so far: 2, 3, 4, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19.
          
          I hope you enjoy it!

Hi,
          
          I edited chapter 2 of Psycho Pass Redemption by changing the way the characters are introduced with ideas I had but never finished writing, and corrected a bit the way it was written. I may keep editing some to add scenes if they bring something to the plot or to fix the style (I wrote it so many years ago, it hurts my eyes to read the long descriptions I did XD) however the story is going to remain the same. I don't know what you think, it's the first time I edit so it's a new experience for me :)

Buenas
          
          Para aquellos interesados les aviso que estoy traduciendo al español mi historia "Colorful World" la cual está en progreso. Me disculpo de antemano si tardo en publicar los capítulos. Como originalmente los escribí en inglés hay muchos términos y expresiones que debo repensar para traducirlos con un significado similar, e investigar las citas que se hacen para que estén como son en español. 
          
          Espero que lo disfruten. Cualquier duda o sugerencia aquí estoy :)
          
          ¡Saludos!
          
          (This is just to say I'm translating my story into Spanish)

Enemies to lovers is great, but I die for lovers/friends to enemies too. You know each other better than anyone, you've fought, cried and suffered together... now I wanna see you smile as you stick a knife in his neck   \ (•◡•) /
          
          Do you like this kind of plot twists?

It's early where I live because of time difference but I wanted to write something. I hope you have a nice day and 2023 brings you new happiness, goals, achievements, and inspiration. Wishing you a happy New Year 
           
          
          Es temprano donde vivo por la diferencia horaria pero quería escribir algo. Espero que pasen un buen día y que el 2023 les traiga nueva felicidad, objetivos, logros e inspiración. Les deseo feliz año nuevo 

Feliz año, Melina ❤️ te deseo toda la buena vibra para el 2023. Gracias por todo tu apoyo.
          
          Besos mil.

Thank you for creating such wonderful story, since I'm having my exam now, I would not be reading them. But I plan to reread all of them from the beginning. Thank you (⁠人⁠*⁠´⁠∀⁠｀⁠)⁠｡⁠*ﾟ⁠+

What’s the order to read your psycho pass books? (After redemption)

Just wanted to say that your writing is quite beautiful. It’s elegant, smooth, and detailed just enough to not be suffocating but instead light.

Hello, just as I did with my Spanish version of "Psycho Pass: Redemption", I am going to make minor modifications in that story and in the sequels, except for "Psycho Pass: Colorful World", which are:
          
          -Add Japanese honorifics.
          -General language and spelling corrections.
          
          These changes don't affect the story but I needed to make them. Any comments or questions here I am. Thanks for reading.