nolongeractive10028

If you read my story, can you give me tips on how to improve it? I know, it’s a weird question, sorry

nolongeractive10028

Thank you so much! This is really helpful!
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move_im_gay_

Also maybe add more tags if you want more people to read it 
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move_im_gay_

Okay I just read it. I really like it, I think one thing that you could do so add more depth to your story is add a flashback explaining how they've met and how long they've known each other etc. 
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