mrtechnonerd

Going forward, I’ll be focusing on improving the overall quality of my writing.
          	
          	That means:
          	
          	•  More descriptive scenes so you can actually picture what’s happening
          	
          	•  Tighter, smoother flow between moments
          	
          	•  More natural and engaging character interactions (especially with Y/n), so conversations feel like real exchanges instead of stiff back-and-forth nonsense.
          	
          	I’ve noticed I’ve gotten a bit lazy with some of my writing choices lately, and I’m not okay with leaving it like that. I want every chapter to feel stronger, more immersive, and actually enjoyable to come back to.
          	My goal is simple: make these stories the best I can possibly write them  something that can put a smile on your face and be worth your time.
          	Thanks for sticking with me. Better chapters are coming!

levikjellin1

@mrtechnonerd I'm excited! Can't wait to see how much you improve!
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Lt_Ace

@mrtechnonerd i see I see my friend.
          	  
          	  Ur stories already make me smile! But if you want to improve them, then who am I to stop you? Have fun while doing it tho pls!
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mrtechnonerd

Going forward, I’ll be focusing on improving the overall quality of my writing.
          
          That means:
          
          •  More descriptive scenes so you can actually picture what’s happening
          
          •  Tighter, smoother flow between moments
          
          •  More natural and engaging character interactions (especially with Y/n), so conversations feel like real exchanges instead of stiff back-and-forth nonsense.
          
          I’ve noticed I’ve gotten a bit lazy with some of my writing choices lately, and I’m not okay with leaving it like that. I want every chapter to feel stronger, more immersive, and actually enjoyable to come back to.
          My goal is simple: make these stories the best I can possibly write them  something that can put a smile on your face and be worth your time.
          Thanks for sticking with me. Better chapters are coming!

levikjellin1

@mrtechnonerd I'm excited! Can't wait to see how much you improve!
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Lt_Ace

@mrtechnonerd i see I see my friend.
            
            Ur stories already make me smile! But if you want to improve them, then who am I to stop you? Have fun while doing it tho pls!
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mrtechnonerd

I haven’t forgotten my other books I promise you.
          
          After a few more updates for my titanfall fic I was thinking of restarting my fnf book.
          
          Does that sound interesting to all of you?

Lt_Ace

@mrtechnonerd nah it’s fine, it’s your story after all. If you think it’s best to restart it, then who am I to stop you? 
            
            just have fun :D
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mrtechnonerd

@Lt_Ace well…I kinda hit a point where I’m not sure where to take it atm. Perhaps I can reread it and try to figure it out from there if that’s what you prefer?
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Lt_Ace

@mrtechnonerd sure! Although why restart it? Well to me it’s fine how it is
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DarkSouls76

Idea for BT what if they gang can figure out how transfer BT's AI consciousness into a fully made automatron body so that he can spend time getting to know everyone without his huge frame getting in the way.

mrtechnonerd

@DarkSouls76 genuine question as I’d love to hear your take on it.
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mrtechnonerd

Interesting idea honestly, but do think by doing  that he’ll loose what makes him special? Or badass?
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Th31macho

Question man, do you have Playstation?

mrtechnonerd

@Th31macho glad you and others are they excited for it! I honestly thought I’d get made fun of for my poor writing lol!
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Th31macho

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Well shit, wanted to play together. Also new chapter, FUCK YEAH
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mrtechnonerd

@Th31macho btw the chapter is almost done, I was busy with a new job and I haven’t had the time to really sit down and fully write. Sorry for the wait!
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