Your new book is good! However try to make chapters longer if you're going for a short story, you definitely have to make it longer to hit your goal, short stories are in between 15-20. Keep writing your book! I'm interested so far!❤️
@dysfunstionalsoul 15-20 chapters, sorry for not being precise, I'm not sure if your book is a one shot or a full book, but if it's a full book it's very good! The chapters have to be longer for more time to develop the story ! If it's a one shot I would recommend doing a full book. You're welcome for the tips! If you need any more just mention me on your page! I'll be happy to help