hari

Hey, it's been a long time since I wrote something in romance, and your stories seem to be amazing!! If you have a moment to spare could you read the story and give me feedback?? Any kind of Constructive Feedback is helpful!! Thank you!!
          Here is the link to the short story!!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/339812088?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=travallene_V&wp_originator=D49Awh5JvgGUcWFro5jjotDtzlfeJkzMp%2FozOFc6ll6JVEy%2BpHh3gJ2PiRFi8nqGgXDNlqUJ33DiV9LsE3iUQ5hvLUw7s4F4fSTILkMgXRpidwSkGnqu2FRKM5IYLmry

Hi
          Thx for the follow love
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