ninaarada

Please be warned that ch 11 may be offensive to some. trigger warning. please ask me if you have questions/concerns.

ninaarada

So my biggest fear so far has happened - I realized something that has me going back and fixing several chapters. When Wes and Josie go separate ways years before seeing each other in present time they will part on not so great terms. therefore, I had to really change up the scene where she is unpacking and he asks her '20 questions.' 
          
          I have completely re-written that section after the smoothie joint in ch 6. and I deleted ch7 ( her POV of that convo). I still have this material and plan to use it again but it just would not match the flow. 
          
          Due to this I had to tweak some material from ch 8 / football/chili scene.
          
          Tomorrow I'm hoping  I will post the now new ch10 which will be present time.
          
          THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

ninaarada

I’ve added the playlist that is inspiring my story - if you want to save it to your Apple Music, message me and I can send you the proper link! 
          
          Hope you’re loving Wes & Josie, most def a rough draft but I’m having so much fun with Because of Us.