Nobleman_Thief45

Hey man everything okay?

You good bro?

are you completly gone? because i loved your persona story and i would love to ser it continued 
          you dont need to but please tell us if you even use this account

Hi there! After my prolonged absence, I have returned! I did myself a favor and took a writing class... holy hell what was I writing...

Do you gonna post next chapter of Adventure of Naoto Kurogane in world of Remnant 

I don't care what your political opinion is, what happened in D.C. is a tragedy. People attended a rally, expressing their opinions, and someone decided to shoot at the crowd. This is gonna be a hopefully better year, but not a great start

So, Cinder got a backstory. A very, very underwhelming and pretty ineffective backstory. So I’m gonna do a little comparison to another character and how to make the backstory better, with all of my very little critic self. Now, Cinder has a list for power, so I’m gonna compare her to another person with a lust for more power. 
          Vergil from DmC 
          You see, if a character has a lust for power, they’ll have a motivation. Both of them are stated to have a motivation to get more power, not wanting to feel weak. Makes sense, but Cinder’s backstory doesn’t reinforce this. Let’s start with her. 
          She has a copy paste story with Cinderella (which I have gripes with, even if she’s based off of her) up until the ball. You see, she shouldn’t feel the need for more power, she had all of it she needed, she killed her oppressors and even a trained huntsman. Also, the Faunus went through the same thing, and they had it worse (take Adam, literally being branded in the face.) But that’s never addressed. And they had the White Fang, but they kinda worked because they had an end goal, take over the humans. Also, Cinder using others like slaves and sending them off to die would contradict her backstory. 
          Now, Vergil. 
          His home was invaded by demons and his mom was killed. Yeah. The thing is, she saved his twin Dante, and on the way to save him, was killed. This made him
          A. Feel a lack of power because he couldn’t stop it.
          B. Feel a lack of power because he thought his mom abandoned because he wasn’t worth it.
          You see, Cinder’s story should’ve been a single ark. Oppressed to being more powerful than oppressers, there, she doesn’t need more power. But that doesn’t happen. She was in the metaphorical rags, and now she has the metaphorical riches. Ark done. 
          Vergil couldn’t do anything, he was a kid and the event happened to quickly for him to do anything in gaining power. He continues on getting more power because he can’t stop what happened, meaning he can’t finish that ark.

Tell me guys, what’s your most under appreciated anime you’ve watched? I’m only a few episodes in but Black Lagoon is up there for my favorites with Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood and Rising of the Shield Hero

WTF I WAS JUST CASUALLY SELECTING MUSIC FOR A FIGHT SEEN AND I GOT FUCKING RICKROLLED WHEN AN ADD CAME UP.
          SOMEONE BOUGHT A 3:30 MINUTE LONG AD THAT'S JUST "NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP." IT'S NOT ADVERTISING ANYTHING. IT'S JUST THE MUSIC VIDEO
          WHO THE FUCK HAS BALLS THESE BIG

I've been replaying a bunch of my favorite games, and right after I finished the 125 hour ride that is Persona 5, I moved on to Fire Emblem: Sacred Stones. So... how 'bout Orson? 
          Also, speaking of favorite games, I've been going and playing the Persona games in reverse order, and I just finished P3 a few weeks ago. I'm going to do a thing that most Persona 5 fans haven't done... besides actually playing the game. I'M GOING TO RECOGNIZE PERSON 2 AND 1
          Also, more news. You may have noticed I put most of my stories on hold. I have way to many. So, my plan is to get another book out, and work on it along side of Remnant's Favorite Spartan." Once the later is finished, I'll open up the other works.