slightly sad oatmeal

XD really? 

Thank you! That really helped a lot!

I'm flattered. XD You want my help? Well, I don't know much about writing good stories, since all my chapters are fairly short and vain.  Something I like to do though is describe the setting and CHARA-cters in detail; sometimes it gives them more personality. For example, if I was describing Sans, I would probably say something along the lines of,
                      "Heya, kiddo," Sans waved slightly, his dark blue hoodie sleeve moved as he waved. I could see the wide grin on his face grow when I noticed the small drip of ketchup on his sleeve, a result of his laziness. I smirked, and he pulled out a bottle of ketchup. In the literal blink of an eye it was gone, leaving only the empty bottle. He winked, which was seemingly impossible, considering he was a skeleton. I stared at the ketchup bottle, as he walked away towards Papyrus.
            :T I hope that helped, If you need anything else, message me. Thanks! :)

@undertale_trash_5150 Sure ^-^
            That sounds awesome, tell me when it starts oke, I wanna read it :3
            
            And you know what, You inspired me to write a story, so I'ma go write it X3
            Ps it involves our Space-pun-war :D

@undertale_trash_5150 No problem :3
            I'm almost done with a new chapter of my own Undertale fanfictions, so because we just became friends I will dedicate the chapter to you ^-^
            
            And success with writing :3

@ElinaViolets Thanks! It means a skeleton that you like the first chapter! Hopefully other people will too!