Magorey327

You are taking a long break from your story since at first you constantly update it until chapter eleven, as if you already had all those chapters already thought out and ready, and I I'm wondering if you're doing the same with the other half of the next chapters?

Magorey327

By the way, in your story of Gon with Pitou, in addition to adding Pitou's Nya in some of his dialogues, I hope you also add funny scenes so that the story is not so serious or empty, since I would be disappointed that the chapters were so simple and also short, for example Gon can pull Pitou's tail, whether on purpose or unconsciously hehe, also that I wet it with a sprayer Or water gun, not to mention what pitou can make cute faces like a certain cat in boots from the movies watching in your story is reference

Magorey327

Ahhhhh I almost forgot to say this and don't forget to put Pitou's characteristic Nya in your Gon x Pitou story, since if you saw the anime you will know that many times when she spoke she arrived To say it in some of his dialogues.
          Well, you must assume that in your story Pitou will come to say it while she starts to be by Gon's side.

oneframe0

@Magorey327 i actually forgot about the nya and i was watching the anime when i was tipping it up  to, thank for reminding me
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Magorey327

I'm very happy that you write your own Gon x pitou story since on Wattpad there are very few stories in English, with more in Spanish.
          Well, Fanfiction and ao3 have not updated their previous children, nor have they added anything new, so more than anything I hope they write Gon stories with pitou here on Wattpad and spiritFanfiction, Since spiritFanfiction is in the lead with 22 Stories while there are like 18 on Wattpad, well now 19 telling yours which is new

oneframe0

@Magorey327  thanks a lot the story was just a random idea that was interesting since it would be haters to lover type of story , i also want to read a pitou x gon fanfic but could find many that were finished and in English. I'm glad you like the story
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