jyanshii
Hey. I decided to check out the story you suggested me. I made a few comments here and there and I hope I can help you improve your writing. Please bear in mind that whatever you read from me is not meant to discourage you, whatsoever. You can think of those as a mere reader's thoughts. It's your
Choice if you decide to follow my suggestions. Yun lang. Good day. :)t
oshiyenteyo
@Blue_Knight Hello! First of all I want to thank you for those constructive criticisms! Makakatulong po sakin ang mga ganun since hindi pa naman ako masyadong expert sa pagsulat XD I will try to follow some of your suggestions :D Yun lang po, good day rin! ^^