Saturnine_morose

Hi! I'd like to ask for your opinion: actually I'm translating my story because I want to share it and I hope to find new feedbacks. Could I ask for your help? 
          It's called "Witch of Clevwood's Ruins" and talks about Alex's journey, as a witch, into the enemies' land, following the princess that captured her (it's GL)
          Thanks either way! 
          
          Here is the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/314926356?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Saturnine_morose&wp_originator=EVb7S7ldYAplF3HCMvXrWlBU7KV%2FhQ5IGF1BCpaQCLwwFW3kXmWRA5ztvyBrS2UXJteSPVXp4zkJwIKgfb1rmWo7l0qOtlfVR9eof6WTOrjikeoIimgCuTGkbbHKQQ51