raynarainbow

@CrazyGirl17 I just started reading it and so far I like it. I thought the necklace was a good touch. While most people would say that the character went back for something usefull in modern times (like a cellphone or wallet), you used a momento from her dead mother as her reasoning. In dueing so, you successfully made her seem like she treasured more in life then just money and items, while creating a glimpse at her past. So far, well done.

raynarainbow

@CrazyGirl17 I just started reading it and so far I like it. I thought the necklace was a good touch. While most people would say that the character went back for something usefull in modern times (like a cellphone or wallet), you used a momento from her dead mother as her reasoning. In dueing so, you successfully made her seem like she treasured more in life then just money and items, while creating a glimpse at her past. So far, well done.

raynarainbow

@SalienHernandez Back! It was pretty cool. It seemed like there was always something to eat or drink and the ocean was super pretty. The only downside was that I had a cold the whole time but hey. Give a little, take a little right? Anyway, it was a nice vacation even though im still confused to as how you can have a cold in one of the warmest places ever. -_- The heck physics?