secrettiger06
Hey man I heard what you said about the story and appreciate the feedback as of now I'm currently editing the story I've completed the editing of chps 1-5 and I saw what you said about the amount of words and I've fixed that within thise chapters as well for example chp 4 was 700 words and is now 1150 which I believe is a fair amount I will also keep in mind the other things that you have said
Thank you : )
secrettiger06
@readdaman it's no problem infact I just rewrote chapter 8, I know you said you don't want to read my story anymore, but I feel it's better now that I've redone those chapters with 9 10 and 11 following soon