brxken_in_pieces

Dude your book needs more detail. I read te he first couple chapters and has like no detail. :(

loyalfriend500

really i thought it was perfect i just wish the chapters could be a little longer so keep that in mind for future stories you may write but other than that its soooooooooooooooo good
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MorganMikaelson100

I have a suggestion  for a story can you make one where a luna finds her mate in her principle  
          
          

MorganMikaelson100

@ForeverYoung121 thank you so much I would write it but I'm in summer school and am being tutored
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sarahgh1214

@MorganMikaelson100 yes of coarse. I'll start working on it as soon as possible
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