seriouslynow

Powerful story! You are a great writer. This deals w issues I’m familiar with, unfortunately. It could use a little editing, but it’s an excellent start/draft—especially for Wattpad. It certainly doesn’t read like a first book—you must be a writer already? I’m no expert, though, so this probably isn’t helpful. I don’t know if you want editorial comments within the story—I’d be happy to add some if you like. Hope you keep writing!