sherby16

Hello! Long time no chat! 
          	So I am sure everyone is aware of the situation going on in the world right now. I am based in the UK and as of tonight one of my two jobs is no longer viable. As of Monday, I'm pretty sure I'm going to be out of work for a month to 3 maybe longer... it is unknown!. 
          	It is a scary time and I'm sure so many people are in the unknown. 
          	All I can say is every silver lining. I always complain I cant write because of work and a busy life. So my promise to myself is from this point in.. if I am confined for so many weeks plus, is to write with no excuses! 
          	I have an opportunity and I am going to take it! I wish everyone the beat of luck in the on going weeks I send all my love and I am hoping I can write and keep you entertained in this time! Xx love you all x

sherby16

Hello! Long time no chat! 
          So I am sure everyone is aware of the situation going on in the world right now. I am based in the UK and as of tonight one of my two jobs is no longer viable. As of Monday, I'm pretty sure I'm going to be out of work for a month to 3 maybe longer... it is unknown!. 
          It is a scary time and I'm sure so many people are in the unknown. 
          All I can say is every silver lining. I always complain I cant write because of work and a busy life. So my promise to myself is from this point in.. if I am confined for so many weeks plus, is to write with no excuses! 
          I have an opportunity and I am going to take it! I wish everyone the beat of luck in the on going weeks I send all my love and I am hoping I can write and keep you entertained in this time! Xx love you all x

sherby16

Right. I took this book of so viewers couldn't read. because I had some really bad feed back, which is upsetting but more so because I know it is true. the truth is my circumstances have changed I no longer have the free time to write as I once did. I removed so I could edit, but again I don't have the time. I have removed this book from view hoping I could tweak and change everything and I cant. 
          So after months I am going to re-release and edit when I have time as the book did well without me removing it. I am just holding back for a few bad reviews, but hey! I am not an edited author, I am a real person with 2 jobs and no time! so here we go back on the free view if you love it great! if not.. well sorry.

sherby16

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Feel so lost with this book I loved writing it and feel so still I can't write because I don't know where to go with it and don't want to end up with a shit ending! I feel like it got such good feed back and I wrote day to day page by page and me I want to do it justice. It's silly because its not a book edited on abookshelf I know I can write sloppy and tweak later but feel like I now want it to be the best! 
          
          I'm on holiday from end of next week meaning free time to write which never happens! Taking my laptop and have 6 days to write under no pressure or alarm clocks! 
          
          Any advice or really what you want to happen in either book would be a great help, no matter how trivial, the best advice has always been from my readers! Love you all let me know how you would like things to happen or what you would like to happen in either book zz

sherby16

So had a brain wave for the TSC. Had a moment where I was like... this could work! wrote it down quickly while at work! Haven't revised this book in a while but feel like with some new inspiration I will go back to it! I am thinking of taking some bits out. I wanted to know did people enjoy the first person views of tom and cara etc or would people much prefer just Athena throughout the whole book, need some input before I start reposting it all thanks xx

sherby16

@AshleighDanser hello thank you that's very helpfull! I've been going back to the book recently and there are some changes I want to make and with my new train of thought it was easier to do without the extra povs as could push the story further on and I was like I'm gonna be left in limbo with cara and Tom's stories! And your right if I do it well enough we dont need to see their thoughts I think alot of it was made for filler and thinking now quality not quantity xx
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AshleighDanser

@sherby16 I'll be honest I didn't like the views of Tom and Cara, I prefered reading of their personalities from Athena, it's her views on other people that form our prejudices and make it a mystery and keep me intrigued. I didn't wanna have sympathy for Cara after the scene with her daughter but I think if Athena had witnessed something it could have her more understanding of Cara's actions and maybe it'd help her grow as a person? And knowing Tom was an animal from his actual point of view just laid everything bare for him, I think if we were kept in the dark we'd keep questioning his actions like did he work of his own accord or was he put up to things from higher powers (then maybe we could garner sympathy and have it all ripped away later on). I'm in love with all of Athena's viewpoints but would love more hints on her past for sure. Love your work, you've kept me hanging on for years, can't wait for more xo
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iLiber

To say the truth, I have not started reading the books but from just the description I can tell they are great.
          P.S: How did I not find you earlier. You are a great writer and I do hope you get constant inspiration.
          Good work and good day. Love ya!

sherby16

Thank you for the message! Hope they live up to your expectations  xxx
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sherby16

The Tudor Witch update - Been a while, I know I am hopeless! next chapter is up on radish and next one is half way written! hoping to blast quite a few chapters through which means in Approx 4 weeks I can start posting them on wattpad! So fingers crossed you'll be getting a weekly update from then on until the book is finished!
          
          TSC Update - I am currently editing chapters, changing certain things that my readers have commented on and generally deleting to much descriptive and adding in drop hints about Athenas past, adding a bit more of Anisas personality and generally tidying up so when I come to writing new chapters it flows better! TSC is not on radish anymore, so once editing is done I do not have to wait to post but while be a few weeks yet for editing xx

MartinaMongan

Heya will u be continuing TSC?
          I would like to see how it ends

sherby16

The chapters I have edited, have new slight tweaks as well drop ins about Athena”s past to give a bit more back ground, explanations for names etc, and I’ve also cancelled out a lot of descriptive text so easier to read, I have to finish that first so I can build on the story promise soon x
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sherby16

Hello lovely I will be, just two jobs at the moment and finding it hard to write. Was on radish aswell so was a bit stricter on when I could post but not on there with the sold courtesan. Currently going through my chapters so far done 1-10 adding in a bit more depth and changing bits people have commented on so it runs more smoothly as soon as I have updated the rest of the chapters I will be writing the rest! Sorry xx
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