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Oh that's sounds nice sorry for the late reply and of course I'd love to be friends!!

Sure why not! I'll help out

(M....maybe •3•.....)
            
            STAP!!>^<

(*le derp* c: so I agree ur a cute potato?)
            
            *pokes u again* NO. ●w●

((*blushes lightly* >~< mhm yeh))
            Nuuu stop *moves hand*

@silversenpai06 alright then but that's only if you choose to use it I'm also still fixing itzel  to his day I want to make her come off as Mary sue alert  but I don't feel like she is she's shown a lot of flaws 

XD lol ok first of all I didn't say anything  about her having a rivalry with sonic and shadow but all in all I think that advice is awesome!i guess I just felt she was Mary Sue-ish and all but I'm glad she isn't cringy and I'll try my best to keep that information and apply it!

Alright so since you want to make a better character I'll point out a few things you can change and possibly make better c:
            
            Sexuality is okay but does she really like both men and woman? (Like maybe search up stuff  so you understand what it means to be that a bit better :3)
            Maybe you can later add a bit of back story as to why her middle name is chaos,and how she can read minds and fly and why she considers  sonic and shadow her rivals and how she met her friends and where shes from (just a back story in general ;> but that's basic stuff) instead of kuudere maybe you can put in temper since she tries to control that which would explain why she has sudden rage attacks. And maybe like she bottles up her feelings(which is why she seems to be really aloof) which causes her to have sudden outbursts and throw out you're anger at any innocent bystander who isn't even the cause of her anger(yes I see her as a hothead X2 but she tries not to be) 
            
            Dang XD  she wrestles ? (>w> is she usally on top or on the botto ?évé) her parents ? (Again would be nice to be explained in a background story x3) I feel like if she reads she wouldn't really be into video games maybe boardgamez (cuz those are amazing as well, but she especially likes chess) lol....forests.....xD. dislikes are okay maybe add some more later on. Is she embarrassed  of anyone seeing her sleep with her plushie,since she puts one a serious,mature act?  
            
            All in all not the worst one I've seen. Trust me some are way worse and cringe worthy -^-

@partypony346 -3- oh fine. Then text me on kik 

XD lol no but I don't want to talk about it here..where everyone can see 

@partypony346 ooh it's that bad? X3 welp I have a smoll thing for trouble makers >v>

XD nuuu but I need to sponsor her so she can go to coleg

@-Zhadowgirl- leave tem out of this XD 
            @partypony346

XD noo its gonna have a bad tem!