slshiner

The first part of Chapter 5 of the Nightmare's Dark is up.  Check it out! Don't forget to comment and vote! Thanks everyone! :)

Azmavath

You are so nice. Thank you for critiqueing my story. I will do what I can with yours, but I've never critigued before.

Azmavath

@slshiner I will give as much as I can.    :)
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slshiner

@Azmavath Thanks! :) I'll take any feedback I can get.
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